This week one of room 23 tasks was to do free choice writing, I decided to write about a floating citadel (a floating palace) I am proud of my work because I know that I wrote a good story and used figurative language in my story! next time I think i could improve on using onomatopoeia in some of my stories. I Hope You Enjoy!

On Wednesday Mrs. Mackinnon did a silly prank on room 23, she showed us a piece of writing that she found on Facebook, it was about dogs wearing nappies she fooled everyone. I was proud of my work because I know that I worked really hard and did a good job, I found trying to think how to put my sentences into place was the hardest.Hope you enjoy.