This week in room 23 one of our must dos was draft writing, but we had to use some of the skills that we have learnt about writing.As you can see I have highlighted some of of my work, that is so that you can see if I have used metaphors, onomatopoeia etc. I.e personification is in green.During this process I thought trying to use metaphors, similes, onomatopoeia etc, was pretty hard, I am really happy with my work because I accomplished using figurative language.

This week room 23 learnt about metaphors.A metaphor is saying that something is something using the word like something i.e snow is freezing cold.I felt drawing my cloud and hail was really hard.

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