rhymes!
There once was a lady that commited a crime
Under her nails there was a bunch of slime
She looked like snot fresh from the pot but
Boiled and sticky way to hot.
There was a teacher at jefferson High
Who I must say was a spy her name was
Miss Anna she was as skinny as a banana
I think she's a spy I don’t know why she’s
Been extra weird lately making sure our
Desks are always clear we had to walk in
Line and not talk.
Roses are red violets are blue
a face like yours belongs in the zoo
a face like yours belongs in the zoo
Don’t worry i’ll be there too not in the cage
But too laugh at you
nice rhymes maybe next time you could not use a color but great rhymes.
ReplyDeleteKi ora Lara
ReplyDeleteI love these rhymes my favorite one was the last one, it was really funny.
I like the way you used bright colors that pop out to hook people in.
Maybe next time you could check your punctuation so it is easier for me to get a breath in
overall fantastic work.
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http://odsshaylac.blogspot.com
Thanks - Shayla.
Lara I love your rhymes there so funny and cool.I could make rhymes like you.
ReplyDeleteHi Lara,
ReplyDeleteI Like How You Took Old Rhymes And Made Them Your Own Maybe Next Time You Could Make Them Longer And Make Them Make A Bit Sense And Instead Of Carrying On With A Different Topic Other Than That It Was Good : )
From Sasha
Hey Lara that was amazing I erspesherly the video.
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