Last week I went kayaking at camp.Only our group got to go to the cooper mine.
Cause:I bought my togs.
Effect:I got to go kayaking and other water activities.
Hi lara, I like how you did a poem and not just a piece of writing. But I didn’t really get the poem maybe you could put why you wrote the poem and what the poem is about but other than that I thought it was a good poem : ) If you want to see my blog here’s my URL https://odssashat.blogspot.co.nz/
Lara, the words you chose to write in your poem created a picture in my head. I also liked how you used other people's pictures but made it your own. I also can see by your information below that you understand what cause and effect is. Well done!
hi lara I like your poem because you did it about camp benzon and you added lots of detail but maybe next time you could make the color of your writing because it is hard to read
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I like how you did a poem and not just a piece of writing. But I didn’t really get the poem maybe you could put why you wrote the poem and what the poem is about but other than that I thought it was a good poem : ) If you want to see my blog here’s my URL https://odssashat.blogspot.co.nz/
Sasha
Lara, the words you chose to write in your poem created a picture in my head. I also liked how you used other people's pictures but made it your own. I also can see by your information below that you understand what cause and effect is. Well done!
ReplyDeletehi lara I like your poem because you did it about camp benzon and you added lots of detail but maybe next time you could make the color of your writing because it is hard to read
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