Friday, 3 August 2018


This week I have wrote a Moment in Time about a  Disappearing Pathway!
Moment in Time is when you focus on one part of a story and use figurative
language and show not tell!
                                                     Hope You Enjoy!
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 12:12

    I would love if I could read what you had write on there, maybe next time you could contract all the colors of the writing.

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  2. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 12:13

    Lara you really did show not tell but I did have a hard time reading it maybe you could change the color of your text.

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  3. Anonymous6 August 2018 at 09:26

    Nice work Lara
    your moment in time was full of show not tell
    but I just sore the writing
    Good work.

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