Friday, 5 April 2019
On Wednesday Mrs. Mackinnon did a silly prank on room 23, she showed us a piece of writing that she found on Facebook, it was about dogs wearing nappies she fooled everyone.
I was proud of my work because I know that I worked really hard and did a good job, I found trying to think how to put my sentences into place was the hardest.Hope you enjoy.
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Hi Lara! I really like how you are doing a argumentative and persuasive text. I agree with you - Dogs should not be wearing nappies. It's not natural. My only feedback for you is maybe you could include the reason dog owners put nappies on their dogs. Is it because their not toilet trained? Or can they not be bothered to pick up after them on their walk? Other than that though, I really like this and I want to read more. (Ok, not literally because if you wrote another persuasive text on dogs wearing nappies it would mean more people were putting nappies on their dogs) but I think you know what I mean. Great work!
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Dear Ruby if you read the description I think that would answer some things you have said
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