Friday, 12 April 2019

This week one of room 23 tasks was to do free choice writing, I decided to write about a floating citadel (a floating palace) I am proud of my work because I know that I wrote a good story and used figurative language in my story! next time I think i could improve on using onomatopoeia in some of my stories. I Hope You Enjoy!
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  1. Anonymous2 May 2019 at 11:54

    Hi Lara! I really like how you highlighted the different colours. Maybe you could get someone to teach you how to make a doc bigger? Other than that I like your discription and your story!
    Keep it up!
    Ruby H

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    1. Anonymous10 April 2020 at 20:10

      Soz for tha late reply. Haha but thanks

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  2. Anonymous24 July 2019 at 09:33

    Hi La's! Great story! I love how you told us what you were proud of, and what you need to keep working on! I also like how you used different colours for you free choice writing! Next time you could maybe learn how to make a google doc bigger, so you don't have to scroll down so long. Otherwise, fantastic post!!!

    Lily

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    1. Anonymous10 April 2020 at 20:09

      Hi Lil,
      Just wanted to let you know that my writing always comes up like that idek why but my teacher said it is fine and just to publish.

      La's

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